dewritten: original So I tried to figure
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So I tried to figure out what was wrong (it gave me a headache.)
The easily recognizable problems were the torso and hip area—though her crotch kind of concerned me (or perhaps she was supposed to be a naga.) Her neck also looked like it was about to snap at any moment, especially under the weight of her enormous head and hair.
Tried to give her a more stable pose, but also encountered a problem with her arms because the only reason the forearms looked correct before (with the wrist aligning correctly by ratio) was because she had a long crotch of doom. They still might be a little too long.
Her stomach/hips still aren’t as wide as I would normally make them, but they look humongous compared to the original. Even though I kept her boobs the same size, they seem a lot smaller because her rib cage is bigger.
Her “come hither”/vacant expression got scrapped along with the weird panties. The pose is a wee bit twisty still.
Wow. I so love what you did with this. She looks a lot more ready to fight now and a lot more disgruntled.