xenohound: i tried to fix this post but

i tried to fix this post but it was a lot harder than i expected it to be?? nothing about that pose makes sense. why is she floating. is she floating? if she’s floating why doesn’t she just turn around? why is there a butt on her thigh? who put those water balloons in her vacuum latex suit?

but yeah i apologize for the scribbliness of this fix, i got kind of frustrated

Despite the unfinished scribbliness, I do like the gist of what you were going for.  She looks very confident and bold.  Focusing on the arm attack rather than showing breasts and butt adds more of a sense of conflict to the picture.