otteroflore: So, I decided to do a

otteroflore submitted:

So, I decided to do a little redraw. Bear with me as I’m not a great artist.

So, the trace: A massive hunk of WTF-kery. And yes, most of those lines (excluding the foot) were direct traces. It’s… terrifying. It’s a she-hulk, mid transformation, with too much botox in her lips and some… weight related leg problems. But I shouldn’t blame her. Maybe she’s a paraplegic weightlifter? Okay, that’s a plausible explanation, but here are two more:

See, female weightlifter, model. Of course their anatomy still isn’t perfect, but it’s a helluva lot better than the mutant frankendoll before them, eh?

Okay, so on to the fixing. It was pretty hard.

Most of the horrible things are gone. Her proportions fit each other in terms of legs vs torso. Her legs have weight, and her bodies have organs. Of course, it’s a rough sketch still, but I’m sadly too lazy to do more than add this bonus picture(of what the artist was actually going for)

More re-draws need random ducks.  (Also, nice work breaking it all down.)