kseniaparomova: redraw/rant I know it

redraw/rant

I know it was a long time ago, and I’m gonna be super critical, but this one still bothers me and I wanna explain why it’s so bad. Not only is it wrong, but it’s wrong from all angles. Her spine is twisted, flattened, and shaved off on the sides, her pelvis is way too high and way too wide(I know it’s wider for a woman but we have limits), the two sides of the pelvis are two thin. The sacrum(triangly part in the middle) is deformed but what should be obvious is the joint between her femur and pelvis. It’s glued together! I know he was going for simplified anatomy, but this isn’t simplified, it’s showing every bone in detail and the principles of anatomy should still apply (spines cannot make a 180 twist). Avoid Hart’s anatomy books, they have a lot of hidden mistakes like this, they vary from book to book, too.

Her outfit is also strange, her breasts are falling out of her top (but they are correct), one false move and she’s flasher girl. I made the top higher and the outfit tight enough so it’ll hold. I find it funny how she clearly has a top, but she’s naked on the bottom, not waistband, no demarcation on her thighs, no clothing folds, nothing. I think her pose was fighting/punching, it looks more like flying, but to me, it’s obvious. She’s pointing in a dancy fashion and those sunglasses give her intentions away. Yep, it’s Disco girl! Fighting crime with funk! :D