cliffracer: Hey, aspiring artist here.

Hey, aspiring artist here. I’d like to get some critique on something I’d finished conjuring earlier, if that’s a thing I can do.

This is my first ‘action pose’ drawing, which has the cool, long-legged alien hero strafe-jumping. The camera quality kind of… ruins the ability to see the motion lines I’d added, but I tried to show motion through her capes and pigtails… I just feel like it was off, and would like critique!

If this isn’t the blog I could get critique from, I’m sorry!

The artist has said it’s okay for me to let other people critique this, so I’m opening it up to the artists who follow this blog. :)  I don’t want this to descend into a pile on though, so try to be helpful and constructive.  I just feel that there are many who could give a better breakdown and critique here, and I think they could be really helpful.

So, what comments do you have for them?  What did they do good?  What could use improvement, or be thought about next time?