redline fix of DC Comics Artemis (during her 90s Wonder Woman phase) panel where she's tripping on her hair, instead of her hair wrapped around her, the redline redraw as her pushing the door open and standing one leg in front of the other with her hair not wrapped around her legs and she is yelling "DIANA!"

panel from Wonder Woman vol. 2 #98 of Artemis (during her Wonder Woman phase, wearing the outfit) screaming "DIANA" as she apparently barges through a door her long blonde hair is wrapped around her body and across her legs in loops so if she took a step, she'd trip and fall, her hip is cocked oddly while her legs are drawn straight down

Artemis redline redraw

I’m a big fan of this blog and I had some free time while I was cooking dinner so I decided to redline this image

Because the original gave me nightmares *shudder*

I decided that because Artemis was slamming the door open then it should be a more dynamic pose rather than her standing there contorting herself in the doorway screaming (who could blame her?). So I established that she opened the door by having her hand on it, the only way I could do this however would be by using *gasp* perspective, the artist’s worst nightmare D: and I put the rest of her body in a position that you could guess that she was bursting through the door ready to attack by making her body language ‘angry’ her fist is balled and she looks like she pushed the door open with the rest of her body, and while I was at it I gave her some organs, too!

That definitely looks like she’s angry and bursting in. Also, she’s not going to trip over her hair this time!

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