Cometa Scooter board art redraw
Reblogged from coriwithclass on Tumblr:
Welcome back as I attempt to fix anatomy with the default photo editor on my phone!
Removing the drifting boob improves the torso a good 90%. Unfortunately it is impossible to fix the owl swivel and sliding shoulder without completely redrawing the top of the picture. Instead I just repositioned her head in a less awkward way. The point of this is really just how easy it was to fix the torso. The original design is a shame because I like the overall coloring style.
I really like this. It preserves most of the action and intent and with a few small fixes makes it more logical. A more involved overhaul would probably have her face the audience viewpoint and change her lower half, since I presume the point is to show her face. Though, yes, I know the real point is to show her breasts and butt at the same time, but it's fun to have different takes and show what else could be done.